Your quibble seems nitpicky and unwarranted. What the author is saying is that the relationship becomes evident if we consider the units of m/s^2 for gravity. They just didn't quite say it like that.
Obviously it’s nitpicky. That’s what a quibble is. But I don’t think it’s unwarranted. How you reason your way to a conclusion is at least as important a lesson as the conclusion itself. And in this case, the part I quoted is a bad lesson.